How can offensive behavior affect teamwork or morale?
학생이 쓴 원문
To achieve the team’s goals, not only individual performance but also mutual trust among team members is important.
Offensive behavior make negative emotion and decrease reliability among team members. Finally it make decrease teamwork and morale among team members.
As a result, we may not achieve the team\'s goal.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. Offensive behavior make negative emotion and decrease reliability among team members.
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. To achieve the team’s goals, not only individual performance but also mutual trust among team members is important.
>>To achieve the team’s goals, not only is individual performance important, but also mutual trust among team members is important.
2. Offensive behavior make negative emotion and decrease reliability among team members.
>>Offensive behavior creates negative emotions and reduces reliability among team members.
3. Finally it make decrease teamwork and morale among team members.
>>Finally, it decreases teamwork and morale among team members.
4. As a result, we may not achieve the team\'s goal.
>>As a result, we may not achieve the team\'s goals.
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