How can people avoid losing things?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is important to have consistent habits for keeping track of my belongs.
I always keep essential items (keys, phone, wallet, glasses) in the same place at home, such as a tray, hook, or drawer.
When I’m on the move, I keep small items together in a pouch or organizer inside my bag.
Before leaving, I do a mental scan and check what I need (e.g., “Phone, wallet, keys”).
I return items immediately to their usual place (e.g., keys go straight into my bag or pocket, not on a random table).
I often look around, asking myself, “Where are my keys, wallet, phone, glasses?”
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. I always keep essential items (keys, phone, wallet, glasses) in the same place at home, such as a tray, hook, or drawer.
3. When I’m on the move, I keep small items together in a pouch or organizer inside my bag.
4. Before leaving, I do a mental scan and check what I need (e.g., “Phone, wallet, keys”).
5. I return items immediately to their usual place (e.g., keys go straight into my bag or pocket, not on a random table).
6. I often look around, asking myself, “Where are my keys, wallet, phone, glasses?”
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. It is important to have consistent habits for keeping track of my belongs.
>>It is important to have consistent habits for keeping track of my belongings.
2. I always keep essential items (keys, phone, wallet, glasses) in the same place at home, such as a tray, hook, or drawer.
>>I always keep essential items (keys, phone, wallet, glasses) in the same place at home, such as on a tray, on a hook, or in a drawer.
>>CORRECT!
>>CORRECT!
>>CORRECT!
>>I often look around and ask myself, “Where are my keys, wallet, phone, glasses?”
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