How can people be tricked into working for scam operations without realizing it at first?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people are easily tricked by scam operations. There are two reasons. First, scammers are good at impersonating. They impersonate local authorities and victims’ families and friends. When being called by local authorities, many people believe they need to cooperate, so they easily give out their private information. Many scammers also impersonate family and friends. In some cases, they use artificial intelligence to mimic voice. This is because many people are more willing to help if the matter is related to friends and family. Secondly, scammers use the societal issues and trends to entice victims. For example, scammers from Cambodia were able to attract large number of Koreans with a job offer. In Korea, having good job with high salary is extremely important. Accordingly, many people flew to Cambodia without a doubt. These kinds of sophisticated plots attracted large number of victims in short period of time.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this, Aciel! Have a good day.
Many people are easily tricked by scam operations. There are two reasons.
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>>> OR: Many people are easily tricked by scam operations for two main reasons.
First, scammers are good at impersonating.
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>>> OR: First, scammers are skilled at impersonation.
They impersonate local authorities and victims’ families and friends.
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>>> OR: They often pretend to be local authorities, or even victims’ family members and friends.
When being called by local authorities, many people believe they need to cooperate, so they easily give out their private information.
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>>> OR: When people receive a call from someone claiming to be an official, they tend to believe they must cooperate, so they willingly share their personal information.
Many scammers also impersonate family and friends. In some cases, they use artificial intelligence to mimic voice.
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>>> OR: Scammers also impersonate family and friends—sometimes even using artificial intelligence to mimic their voices.
This is because many people are more willing to help if the matter is related to friends and family.
>>> OR: This works because people are more likely to help when the situation seems related to someone they know.
Secondly, scammers use the societal issues and trends to entice victims.
>>> Second, scammers take advantage of current social issues and trends to lure victims.
For example, scammers from Cambodia were able to attract large number of Koreans with a job offer.
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In Korea, having good job with high salary is extremely important. Accordingly, many people flew to Cambodia without a doubt.
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>>> OR: In Korea, having a stable, high-paying job is extremely important, so many people flew to Cambodia without much hesitation.
These kinds of sophisticated plots attracted large number of victims in short period of time.
>>> These kinds of sophisticated schemes have deceived a large number of victims in a short period of time.
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