How can people believe in truths without evidence? Is mind or matter more real?

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People sometimes betray us.
There are times that it is difficult to determine the truth.

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Believing in something is matter of mind.

>> Better: Believing in something is a matter of mind.

One of the good examples is a religion.

>> One of the good examples is religion.

All of the religions have myths that are not based on facts of truths.

>> correct

>> OR: All religions have myths that are not based on facts.

Even the tenet or bible of Christianity is full of non-scientific stories.

>> correct

How could a woman get pregnant by herself? 

>> correct

Even scientific evidence could be meaningless to someone who want to believe what he/she would like to believe regardless of facts.

>> Even scientific evidence could be meaningless to someone who wants to believe what he/she would like to believe regardless of facts.

Thinking about why in the world we have so many people who rely on his own belief regardless of objective opinions from others or facts, there are a lot of things happening that we can’t explain by science.

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>> OR: Thinking about why in the world we have so many people who rely on his own belief regardless of the objective opinions of others or facts. There are a lot of things happening that Science can\'t explain.

Although technologies and science have been developed a lot, a human is still weak and not knowledgeable enough to explain how life has been created.

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We sometimes don’t know what the truth is.

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There were countless cases that what we believed it was truth turned out later it was not.

>> There were countless cases that what we believed in was truth that turned out later it was not.

>> OR: There were countless cases that what we believed in was truth but later on it was a lie.

Ancient people believed that the earth was flat.

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We sometimes are betrayed by a person we believed in.

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>> OR: We are sometimes betrayed by the people we believe in.