How can people best be encouraged to make healthier lifestyle choices?(ANSWEE)

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Thank you for doing our essay homework.
I agree that enough rest and eating healthy are very important in keeping our body healthy.

I think everything should be in balance if we want to live a healthy life. :)
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~Teacher Charry

The company should shorten the working hours for thier employees.

>> The company should shorten the working hours for their employees.

Also, they sould have some free time and enjoy themselves.

>> They also should have some free time to enjoy themselves.
And, we shoud live healtier.

>> In addition, we should also do our part to be healthier.

We have to eat healty foods and eat less instant foods.

>> We have to eat healthy food and eat less instant/processed food.
I think the most important thing is a good rest!

>> CORRECT!