How can people prepare for natural disasters?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. There is really nothing we can do to stop natural disasters from happening, but we can prepare for it. Being ready makes a big difference.
- T. Beth
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To prepare for natural disaster, reasonable procedures will be informed to persons.
>>> To prepare for natural disasters, reasonable procedures will be informed to people.
>>> OR: To prepare for natural disasters, the people will be informed with reasonable procedures.
I think that Not if i`m careful about what they offer notifications, I can prevent a [이름]imum of damages.
>>> I think that if I am cautious about the notification they give, I can [이름]imize the damages.
Theses days, the government work as control towel in case they expect citizen to damage like high, low temperature, micro dust and some chemicals are leaked by the accident from the factory.
>>> Theses days, the government works as a control tower in case they expect citizen to experience damages caused by high, low temperature, micro dust and some chemicals that are leaked by the accident from the factory.
I want government to give a message like this more quickly and accurately.
>>> I want the government to give a message like this more quickly and accurately.
>>> OR: I hope the government would disse[이름]ate information like this more quickly and accurately.
And we ask the government to make facilites in natural disaster experience cities to protect them.
>>> And we ask the government to make facilities in natural disaster prone cities/areas to protect them.
I just think that above 2 ways is the best to prepare ways.
>>> I just think that this two things that I mentioned are the best ways.
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