How can people stay organized?
학생이 쓴 원문
If you want to stay organization well, you should make a rule for organization.
Because it is not relationship such as a friends.
This means compulsiveness is necessary.
강사 첨삭
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If you want to stay organization well, you should make a rule for organization.
>> If you want an organization to run well, you should establish clear rules.
Because it is not relationship such as a friends.
>> This is because an organization is not the same as a friendship.
This means compulsiveness is necessary.
>> That means some level of strictness is necessary.
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