How can self-introduction help build a relationship?
학생이 쓴 원문
I tend to introduce myself to the people when meet them for the first time.
I think that the other person opens their mind and introduces themselves too.
If we have a conversation, we can get to know each other more and get closer.
and we can also
We also build trust in each other by talking to each other.
Above all, I think it is important to introduce yourself to the other person in a realistic way without lying.
I have been meeting many people around me and I getting along well with them.
Because when I meet them, I greet them first and talk to them.
And I always have positive conversations with people when I meet them.
강사 첨삭
I can say that you are a friendly person, Jullia. No wonder you can build a good conversation during the first meeting.
-Faith-
I tend to introduce myself to the people when meet them for the first time.>> I tend to introduce myself to people I meet for the first time.
I think that the other person opens their mind and introduces themselves too.
I think that the other person opens their mind and introduces themselves too.
>> I think that the other person opens their mind and introduces themselves, too.
If we have a conversation, we can get to know each other more and get closer.
If we have a conversation, we can get to know each other more and get closer.
>> CORRECT
and we can also We also build trust in each other by talking to each other.
and we can also We also build trust in each other by talking to each other.
>> Also, we can build trust in each other by talking to each other.
OR Also, we can build trust in each other by having a conversation.
Above all, I think it is important to introduce yourself to the other person in a realistic way without lying.
>> CORRECT
Above all, I think it is important to introduce yourself to the other person in a realistic way without lying.
>> CORRECT
OR Most importantly, it is important to introduce oneself to others honestly.
I have been meeting many people around me and I getting along well with them. Because when I meet them, I greet them first and talk to them.
I have been meeting many people around me and I getting along well with them. Because when I meet them, I greet them first and talk to them.
>> I have been meeting many people around me and getting along well with them because when I meet them, I greet them first and talk to them.
And I always have positive conversations with people when I meet them.
And I always have positive conversations with people when I meet them.
>> I always have positive conversations with people I meet.
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