How can stress be good or helpful to us?
학생이 쓴 원문
My life impetus is fear about being poor. When I was a kid, my parents were poor. It was hard time. I couldn\'t have big dream. My parents couldn\'t support me as much as I wanted. Now, I must take care of my children. I want to support my children as much as they want. Stress of being poor gives me lots of pressure and energy for keeping living well.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]ny,
Thank you for submitting your homework. It\'s touching to read about how much you love your kids, you\'re a good dad.
Take care and see you in class! :)
Regards,
T. Angelica
My life impetus is fear about being poor. >>My life impetus is the fear of being poor.
When I was a kid, my parents were poor.
>> CORRECT
It was hard time.
>> It was a hard time.
I couldn\'t have big dream.
>> I couldn\'t have a big dream
OR >> I couldn\'t have big dreams
My parents couldn\'t support me as much as I wanted.
>>CORRECT
Now, I must take care of my children.
>> CORRECT
I want to support my children as much as they want.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I want to support my children as much as they want me to.
Stress of being poor gives me lots of pressure and energy for keeping living well.
>> The stress of being poor gives me lots of pressure and energy to keep living well.
OR >> Wanting to give my kids a better life drives me to work harder and to keep living well.
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