How can stress be good, useful, or necessary?
학생이 쓴 원문
Usually, people think stress as just a bad thing.
It is right, but also it\'s not.
Because people get stress every time that they are focusing.
Therefore, stress is such a thing that are necessary and we should control.
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- Debbie
>> Usually, people just think of stress as a bad thing.
It is right, but also it\'s not.
>> They have a point, but stress is not entirely bad.
Because people get stress every time that they are focusing.
>> It\'s because people get stressed every time they focus.
Therefore, stress is such a thing that are necessary and we should control.
>> Therefore, stress is necessary, but we should manage it.
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