How can students prevent stress from staying at home due to COVID-19?
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I think stress is unavoidable thing in covid-19 situation not only for just students, but also for everyone. However there are some way to relieve stress in home. First, talk with your family in a harmonious family atmosphere. Second, wake up at regular times, exercise every day , and live a regular life. Third, follow the quarantine rules, but meet your friends sometimes or take a walk in a quiet park.
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Hi, Daniel! It\'s good to know your opinion about how to prevent stress due to COVID-19. I think they would be quite useful for everyone who\'s encountering stress these days. Thank you for writing this. Keep safe!
~T. Annie ^^
I think stress is unavoidable thing in covid-19 situation not only for just students, but also for everyone.
>>I think stress is an unavoidable thing in the COVID-19 situation, not only for students, but also for everyone.
However there are some way to relieve stress in home.
>>However, there are some ways to relieve stress at home
First, talk with your family in a harmonious family atmosphere.
>> Correct!
Second, wake up at regular times, exercise every day , and live a regular life.
>>Second, wake up at a regular time, exercise every day, and live a regular life.
Third, follow the quarantine rules, but meet your friends sometimes or take a walk in a quiet park.
>>Correct!
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