How can tourists be educated to follow rules or norms when visiting another country?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is difficult to expect tourists to fully abide by the rules and norms. This is because the duration of the trip is relatively shorter and, in most cases, it is for entertainment. However, there are several ways to educate foreigners. First, it is from media. Media will make foreigners naturally adopts new rules and norms. With the usage of media, many foreigners have more willingness to learn new rules. For example, many foreigners learn Korean rules and norms from K-drama. Recently, K-pop demon hunters from Netflix recorded major hit and many foreigners try to follow the greeting and restaurants manners. Secondly, it can be from the school. Globalization triggered diversity and many schools started to accept foreign nationals. According to recent research, international students mark up more than half in top 10 universities. By promoting environment where diverse ideas and opinions are easily stated, students can embrace and respect foreign rules and norms.
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Thank you for this, Aciel. Have a great day ahead!
It is difficult to expect tourists to fully abide by the rules and norms.
It is difficult to expect tourists to fully abide by the rules and norms.
>>> correct
This is because the duration of the trip is relatively shorter and, in most cases, it is for entertainment.
>>> correct
>>> OR: This is because their trips are usually short and mostly for entertainment.
However, there are several ways to educate foreigners.
>>> correct
First, it is from media.
>>> correct
>>> OR: First, education can come through the media.
Media will make foreigners naturally adopts new rules and norms.
>>> Media can help foreigners naturally adopt new rules and customs.
With the usage of media, many foreigners have more willingness to learn new rules.
>>> Through exposure to media, many foreigners become more willing to learn about local culture.
For example, many foreigners learn Korean rules and norms from K-dramas.
>>> correct
Recently, K-pop demon hunters from Netflix recorded major hit and many foreigners try to follow the greeting and restaurants manners.
>>> correct
Secondly, it can be from the school.
>>> Second, education can happen through schools.
Globalization triggered diversity and many schools started to accept foreign nationals.
>>> correct
According to recent research, international students mark up more than half in top 10 universities.
>>> According to recent research, international students make up more than half of the population in the top 10 universities.
By promoting environment where diverse ideas and opinions are easily stated, students can embrace and respect foreign rules and norms.
>>> OR: By promoting an environment where diverse ideas and opinions are freely shared, students can learn to understand and respect foreign rules and norms.
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