How can traffic accidents be avoided or lessened?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think many people are always aware of a traffic notice. And then, it can be avoided and lessened.
Most people think they are good driver. But this is very dangerous thought.
We don\'t know about traffic accidents occur when, what, why, and how.
Someday, it suddenly crashes my back other car.
So, we have to be always aware of notice such as speed limit, no drunk drive, road sign.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. Yes, driving needs careful attention and awareness.
- T> Beth
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I think many people are always aware of a traffic notice. And then, it can be avoided and lessened.>>> OR: I think if many people are aware of traffic notices, traffic accidents could be avoided or lessened.
Most people think they are good driver.
>>> correct
But this is very dangerous thought.
>>> But this is a very dangerous thought.
We don\'t know about traffic accidents occur when, what, why, and how.
>>> We don\'t know when, what, why or how accidents occur.
Someday, it suddenly crashes my back other car.
Someday, it suddenly crashes my back other car.
>>> Sometimes, a car just suddenly bumps at the back of my car.
So, we have to be always aware of notice such as speed limit, no drunk drive, road sign.
So, we have to be always aware of notice such as speed limit, no drunk drive, road sign.
>>> So, we have to always be aware of notices such as speed limit, no drunk driving, and other road signs.
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