How can traveling be educational?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, people can learn various lessons when traveling. Especially, traveling alone is very educational. That\'s because when people travel alone in other countries, they have to do all things in person without family or friends. By resolving some problems that they face when traveling, they are likely to get to be independent. In addition, they can be more diligent and deliberate because they should fix all plans by themselves. For example, when I visited Canada last year, I had to do all things such as buying a ticket or getting on an airplane in person, At first, I was really afraid and frustrated. But, the more experiences I have, the more confident and independent I am. In this point, traveling gives not just pleasure but also educational experiences to people. I think that it is important for young people to experience these things because they can help children to have a dream. So, I would say traveling helps people to be more mature ,which means traveling is educational.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. Good point. These experiences while traveling can help people learn some ways of life.
- T. Beth
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In my opinion, people can learn various lessons when traveling. >>>> correct
Especially, traveling alone is very educational.
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>>> OR: To be specific, traveling alone is very educational.
That\'s because when people travel alone in other countries, they have to do all things in person without family or friends.
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By resolving some problems that they face when traveling, they are likely to get to be independent.
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In addition, they can be more diligent and deliberate because they should fix all plans by themselves.
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For example, when I visited Canada last year, I had to do all things such as buying a ticket or getting on an airplane in person.
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At first, I was really afraid and frustrated.
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But, the more experiences I have, the more confident and independent I am.
>>>> But, the more experiences I had, the more confident and independent I was.
In this point, traveling gives not just pleasure but also educational experiences to people.
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I think that it is important for young people to experience these things because they can help children to have a dream.
>>>> correct
So, I would say traveling helps people to be more mature, which means traveling is educational.
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