How can traveling be educational
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We can feel and experience many things from traveling. We can learn history and various cultures. Also I think it’s good for our mental health. Some might think traveling is bothering thing but I think it’s good to refresh.That’s why I think traveling can be educational.
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Hi [이름]! That\'s true! Traveling is very educational and fun. Not only will you be enjoying, but you\'ll get to know a lot of new things too! :)
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We can feel and experience many things from traveling.
>> CORRECT
We can learn history and various cultures.
>>CORRECT
Also I think it’s good for our mental health.
>> Also, I think it’s good for our mental health.
Some might think traveling is bothering thing but I think it’s good to refresh.
>> Some might think traveling is a boring thing but I think it’s good way to refresh ourselves.
That’s why I think traveling can be educational.
>> CORRECT
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