How can traveling be educational?
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Visiting historical places can be educational to students. I think this is the most common way that school uses for education. Before going to some historical places, students learn stories related with them. Children have already got information about places and landmarks, so teacher asks them make groups and do activities. These activities are comprised with some questions that students have already studied. They can solve those by using their own knowledge. As the saying “Seeing is believing”, children can adapt their experience with textbooks and understand what they learned more deeply. Through this process, traveling can be educational to students.
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Visiting historical places can be educational to students.
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I think this is the most common way that school uses for education.
>>> correct
Before going to some historical places, students learn stories related with them.
>>> Before going to some historical places, students learn stories related to them.
Children have already got information about places and landmarks, so teacher asks them make groups and do activities.
>>> Children have already gotten information about places and landmarks, so the teacher asks them to make groups and do activities.
These activities are comprised with some questions that students have already studied.
>>> These activities are comprised of some questions that students have already studied.
They can solve those by using their own knowledge.
>>> correct
As the saying “Seeing is believing”, children can adapt their experience with textbooks and understand what they learned more deeply.
>>> correct
>>> OR: With the saying “Seeing is believing”, children can relate their experience with textbooks and understand what they learned more deeply.
Through this process, traveling can be educational to students.
>>> correct
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