How can travelling be educational?
학생이 쓴 원문
Traveling provides a lot of experience and education. First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country. get to know the culture, you will be able to understand the philosophy of value education in that country. And Ican make friends with people in the travel area. Through conversations with people from other countries, know about what I didn\'t know and share it with each other. In addition, many other things show that travel is educational.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! That\'s true! Traveling is very educational and fun. Not only will you be enjoying, but you\'ll get to know a lot of new things too! :)
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Traveling provides a lot of experience and education.
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First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country.
>> First, learn and understand the language used in that country. and learn about the culture of that country.
get to know the culture, you will be able to understand the philosophy of value education in that country.
>> I can get to knot the culture and understand the philosophy of education in the country.
And I can make friends with people in the travel area.
>> I can also make new friends when I travel
Through conversations with people from other countries, know about what I didn\'t know and share it with each other.
>> Through conversing with the people there, we can discover new things and share it with other people.
In addition, many other things show that travel is educational.
>> In addition, there are many things that shows how traveling is educational.
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