How can we be heroes today? Think of some practical ways that we can be heroes in everyday life
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a father, a husband and a son of my parents. Being a good father, good a husband and good a son is very difficult at the same time. If I do this, I can be hero. Traditionally, mother and daughter-in-law can\'t be close, I have to arbitrate between them. A father can make universe to their children. My children will grow up as much as I show to them and I have to earn money to them. Of course, I should prepare my life after retirement. It seems to be impossible. If I am done those impossible missions, I can be a hero.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]ny,
Thank you for your homework. I think that you are already a hero to your parents, wife, and kids.
You are a hardworking man and I\'m sure that they are very proud of you already.
Regards,
T. Angelica
I am a father, a husband and a son of my parents. >>CORRECT.
Being a good father, good a husband and good a son is very difficult at the same time.
>>Being a good father, a good husband, and a good son can be very difficult to manage at the same time.
If I do this, I can be hero.
>>If I do this, I can be a hero.
Traditionally, mother and daughter-in-law can\'t be close, I have to arbitrate between them.
>>Traditionally, the mother and the daughter-in-law aren\'t close so I have to arbitrate between them.
A father can make universe to their children.
>>A father can make the universe for their children.
My children will grow up as much as I show to them and I have to earn money to them.
>>My children will grow up as much as I show them and I have to earn money for them.
Of course, I should prepare my life after retirement.
>>Of course, I should prepare my life after retirement.
It seems to be impossible. If I am done those impossible missions, I can be a hero.
>>It seems to be impossible but if I am able to do these impossible tasks, I can be a hero.
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