How can we combat mercury pollution?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is very difficult to deal with mercury pollution.
Thinking solutions is very easy, but do the solutions is not easy.
However, we can do very simple things to protect the Earth from mercury.
I don\'t know the exact solutions, but if we follow the government\'s politics or recommendations, we can protect from mercury pollution.
I will try to find the solutions.
강사 첨삭
Hello Chloe!
Here are my corrections.
I think it is very difficult to deal with mercury pollution. Thinking solutions is very easy, but do the solutions is not easy.
>>I think it is very difficult to deal with mercury pollution. Thinking solutions is very easy, but doing it is not easy.
However, we can do very simple things to protect the Earth from mercury.
>>However, we can do very simple things to protect the earth from mercury.
I don\'t know the exact solutions, but if we follow the government\'s politics or recommendations, we can protect from mercury pollution.
>>I don\'t know the exact solutions, but, if we follow the government\'s recommendations, we can protect the earth from mercury pollution.
I will try to find the solutions.
>>Correct!
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