How can we develop more good habits?

2024-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think It is important to set a goal what we have to do. goal is very realistic and specific, It should be match with the habits we pursue. If we set a goal, start by breaking down big goals into small steps, Then, the chances of success increase significantly. Motivating our-self is the key factor in forming habits. and forming habits may take time, so don\'t give up. The key is consistently strive and maintaning the habits for a long time.

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I think It is important to set a goal what we have to do.

>>> I think it is important to set a goal of what we have to do.
goal is very realistic and specific, It should be match with the habits we pursue.

>>> Goal should be very realistic and specific. It should be a match with the habits we pursue.

If we set a goal, start by breaking down big goals into small steps,

>>> correct
Then, the chances of success increase significantly.
>>> correct
Motivating our-self is the key factor in forming habits. and forming habits may take time, so don\'t give up.

>>> Motivating ourselves is the key factor in forming habits and forming habits may take time, so don\'t give up.

The key is consistently strive and maintaning the habits for a long time.

>>> The key is consistently striving and maintaining the habits for a long time.

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