How can we make our cities safer places to live?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think safe place must have many lights.
So anyplace that a lot of people or few people need to increase street lamps.
And police or local crime prevention unit must have patrol often to prevent crime.
If i have a chance join local crime prevention unit, I will do it best!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Angela,
Thank you for writing your homework. Yes, I agree with you, because most crimes are done in the dark, and when there are enough rights and working CCTvs perpetrators are afraid to commit a crime.
Enjoy the rest df your day!
Aki~
I think safe place must have many lights.
>>> I think a safe place must have many lights.
So anyplace that a lot of people or few people need to increase street lamps.
>>> So there must be street lamps anywhere where people pass by.
And police or local crime prevention unit must have patrol often to prevent crime.
>>> And police or local crime prevention unit must have patrol often to prevent crime.
>>> Also, there should be a police visibility anywhere.
If i have a chance join local crime prevention unit, I will do it best!.
>>> If I have a chance to join the local crime prevention unit, I will do my best!
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