How can we make ourselves eat healthier food?

Hi Min!

Thank you for your composition today.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

It is so difficult and important thing to whom live oneself.

>> It is so difficult for people to live by themselves.
because cooking and washing a dish takes so much times, and makes me tired, so we usually choose to go outside to eat.

>> Cooking and washing the dishes take so much time and effort that they usually choose to eat out. 

of course, some peoples have a good food for healt in outside.

>> Of course, there are places that serve healthy food.

but I think most of the people who live oneself have a junkfood and they don\'t care the food what they eat is good for their body or not.

>> However, I think that the people who live alone prefer junk food because they don\'t care whether the food is healthy or not.

they just care about how they can get the cheapper one.

>> They just care about eating for a cheaper price.
I think, to make ourselves eat healthier food, we must do that.

>> I think, to make ourselves eat healthier food, we must push ourselves to do it.

First, don\'t be a lazy person.

>> Correct

Second, don\'t be the scrooge.

>> Correct