how can we practice bravery in everyday life, even with small challenges?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I try something for the first time, I need some courage. But once I start, I feel like I can do anyting.
Just do it!
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Sunny! Great job! Your sentences are clear and mostly correct. You can also try using linking words (like because, however, and although) to make your writing smoother. You are making steady progress; you’re on the right track. See you in class! ~Teacher Jane ( :
When I try something for the first time, I need some courage.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: When I try something for the first time, I need a bit of courage.
But once I start, I feel like I can do anyting.
>> But once I start, I feel like I can do anything.
Just do it!
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Like the saying goes, \"Just do it!\"
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