How can we preserve the future for the next generation?

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Air pollution and environment issues have been raised many times around world.

>> Air pollution and environmental issues have been raised many times around world.

Many professionals insist that people can\'t live in the earth if we don\'t put the efforts to preserve our environment continuously.

>> Many professionals insist that people can\'t continue living on the Earth if we don\'t exert efforts to preserve our environment.

When I was young, I could drink water of stream or river.

>> When I was young, I could drink water from streams or rivers.
 I didn\'t expect that we needed to buy water from the market.

>> CORRECT

People make a lot of goods which make people convenient.

>> People make a lot of goods which make people\'s loves more convenient.

More goods people create, more environment spoiled.

>> CORRECT

I don\'t know what is the best way to keep our environment, but I can do small things for it.

>> I don\'t know what the best way is to save our environment, but I can do small things to help.
Recycle is one of the way to keep it and not to use plastic goods.

>> Recycling and not using plastic goods are some ways to keep it.

I have seen a documentary about plastic mountain in Hawaii.

>> CORRECT

All trash came from Asia gathered in Hawaii.

>> All trash came from Asia and is dumped in Hawaii.

But local people in Hawaii don\'t have anything to protect their island.

>> Local people in Hawaii can\'t do anything to protect their island.

If trash come to the islands, tourists can\'t enjoy one of the most beautiful beach because of trash.

>> If garbage will continuously be dumped on the island, tourists may not be able to enjoy one of the most beautiful beaches anymore.