How can we prevent accidents caused by DUIs (Driving Under Influence)?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the Korea, we are doing some promotion for prevent accidents caused by DUIs. And some drivers bring their own gum for prevent from sleepiness. Or we also hanging a banner. So we can see the banner from Korea anywhere. And on the expressway, we have resting place for sleepy drivers. This ways are how to prevent accidents caused by DUIs.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you very much for excellently explaining the ways on how to prevent accidents caused by DUIs in your country.
Thank you very much for excellently explaining the ways on how to prevent accidents caused by DUIs in your country.
I hope all drivers will be responsible when it comes to driving because being reckless in driving can cost lives.
See you again in class later. ^^
Take care.
See you again in class later. ^^
Take care.
~Teacher Charry
>> In Korea, we are doing some promotions to prevent accidents caused by DUIs.
And some drivers bring their own gum for prevent from sleepiness.
>> In addition, some drivers bring their own gum to prevent sleepiness.
Or we also hanging a banner.
>> We also hang a banner to remind the drivers.
So we can see the banner from Korea anywhere.
>> CORRECT!
And on the expressway, we have resting place for sleepy drivers.
>> Also, on the expressway, we have resting places for sleepy drivers.
This ways are how to prevent accidents caused by DUIs.
>> These ways are how we prevent accidents caused by DUIs.
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