How can we prevent pandemics in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
To prevent pandemics in the future, we should not eat wild animals by hunting.
The nature is not clean and reliable like in the old days. It is polluted.
We don\'t know what viruses had infected to the animals which could also infect humans.
During the past, we have seen many cases that viruses came from the animals.
Especially from wild boars, monkeys, camels, bats and ticks but there could be numerously more that we don\'t know.
In our normal lives, we need to wash our hands with soap over 30 seconds or use hand sanitizer frequently and keep our body clean from the contamination.
In addition when we have colds or any virus infections, I think it is mandatory now to wear masks and cover our mouths when sneezing in front of the other people in manner.
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The nature is not clean and reliable like in the old days. It is polluted.
We don\'t know what viruses had infected to the animals which could also infect humans.
During the past, we have seen many cases that viruses came from the animals.
Especially from wild boars, monkeys, camels, bats and ticks but there could be numerously more that we don\'t know.
In our normal lives, we need to wash our hands with soap over 30 seconds or use hand sanitizer frequently and keep our body clean from the contamination.
In addition when we have colds or any virus infections, I think it is mandatory now to wear masks and cover our mouths when sneezing in front of the other people in manner.
To prevent pandemics in the future, we should not eat wild animals by hunting.
>> CORRECT
The nature is not clean and reliable like in the old days. It is polluted.
>>Nature is not as clean and reliable as it is in the old days. It is now polluted.
We don\'t know what viruses had infected to the animals which could also infect humans.
>> We don\'t know what viruses had infected the animals which might also infect humans.
During the past, we have seen many cases that viruses came from the animals.
>>During the past, we have seen many cases that viruses came from animals.
Especially from wild boars, monkeys, camels, bats and ticks but there could be numerously more that we don\'t know.
>> CORRECT
In our normal lives, we need to wash our hands with soap over 30 seconds or use hand sanitizer frequently and keep our body clean from the contamination.
>>CORRECT
In addition when we have colds or any virus infections, I think it is mandatory now to wear masks and cover our mouths when sneezing in front of the other people in manner.
>>In addition, when we have colds or any viral infections, it is mandatory now to wear masks and cover our mouths when sneezing in front of the other people in manner.
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