How can we protect the environment and at the same time improve people's standard of living?
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Environmental protection and economic development have become enemies in recent years.
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We all know that both of them are important.
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But we often can’t strike a balance between them.
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Some people hold the belief that economic development should never be at the cost of the environment, whereas many others are of the opinion that economic development is the most important, no matter how much it costs.
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As far as I am concerned, environmental protection is much more important than economic development.
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So we should give an overwhelming priority to environmental protection.
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First and foremost, environmental protection is the requirement of sustainable development.
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We all know that the resources in this world are limited, and human is consuming these limited resources in a rapid pace and destroying the environment seriously.
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If we destroy the environment, we will commit a crime to the future generations.
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So we should attach importance to environmental protection in order to leave a better space.
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