How can we show everyone is equal?
학생이 쓴 원문
We live in a equl society, however the unequality is still alive.
We have to make a new laws about equal. so we can prove we are all equal.
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We live in a equl society, however the unequality is still alive.
>> We live in an equal society; however, inequality is still present.
We have to make a new laws about equal. so we can prove we are all equal.
>> We need to create new laws to promote equality so we can prove that we are all equal.
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