How can wealth and power affect the way justice is carried out? Do you think powerful people are tre
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The point that I was shocked about when watching Epstein documentary was that he was convicted of assaulting minors when he was first caught in Florida. As far as I can remember he was only convicted of prostitution and severed 12 months sentence. If he was caught then, I believe that further victims can have been prevented. Also, this shows how wealth and power can have big influence on judicial system. There are several ways that wealthy and powerful individuals treat differently by the legal system. The first and the most evident example is the bail which is pre trail freedom. Money secure bail allowing the affluent to remain free and prepare their defense and avoid the negative impact of detention center. Also, it is easier for affluent individuals to find judicial loophole and exploit it by hiring inept attorneys. In Korea, wealthy individuals hire attorneys who used to be judges and prosecutors to exploit the privilege of their former post.
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Thank you for this, Aciel. Money talks indeed. Have a good one!
The point that I was shocked about when watching Epstein documentary was that he was convicted of assaulting minors when he was first caught in Florida.
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>> OR: The point that shocked me most while watching the Epstein documentary was that he was originally charged with assaulting minors when he was first caught in Florida.
As far as I can remember he was only convicted of prostitution and severed 12 months sentence.
>>> As far as I can remember, however, he was ultimately convicted only of prostitution and served a 12-month sentence.
If he was caught then, I believe that further victims can have been prevented.
>>> OR: If he had been properly punished at that time, I believe further victimization could have been prevented.
Also, this shows how wealth and power can have big influence on judicial system.
>>> correct
>>> OR: This case clearly shows how wealth and power can exert a strong influence on the judicial system.
There are several ways that wealthy and powerful individuals treat differently by the legal system.
>>> There are several ways in which wealthy and powerful individuals are treated differently by the legal system.
The first and the most evident example is the bail which is pre trail freedom.
>>> OR: The first and most evident example is bail, which allows pre-trial freedom.
Money secure bail allowing the affluent to remain free and prepare their defense and avoid the negative impact of detention center.
>>> OR: Posting bail enables affluent defendants to remain free, prepare their defense, and avoid the negative effects of detention. I
Also, it is easier for affluent individuals to find judicial loophole and exploit it by hiring inept attorneys.
>>> In addition, it is easier for wealthy individuals to find legal loopholes and exploit them by hiring highly skilled attorneys.
In Korea, wealthy individuals hire attorneys who used to be judges and prosecutors to exploit the privilege of their former post.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In Korea, for example, affluent individuals often hire lawyers who previously served as judges or prosecutors in order to take advantage of the influence and connections associated with their former positions.
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