How can you avoid a wrong order?

2019-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 James

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In order to avoid a wrong order should be double check to the company I ordered. Firstly, I have to check whether my order is correct or not. Then, I would better to check again to the company, before the order comes to my home. By doing that, I can reduce to receive a wrong order. I have a few experiences I made mistakes ordering. I have been cklicked wrongly about colors and quantity. Unfortunately, It was my fault. So I was not able to refund and change for free.

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In order to avoid a wrong order should be double check to the company I ordered.
>>> In order to avoid a wrong order, we should double check the item to the company. 
Firstly, I have to check whether my order is correct or not. 
>>> CORRECT
Then, I would better to check again to the company, before the order comes to my home.
>>> Then, I would better check again to the company, before the order comes to my home.
By doing that, I can reduce to receive a wrong order.
>>> By doing that, I have a small chance to receive a wrong order. 
I have a few experiences I made mistakes ordering. 
>>> CORRECT
I have been cklicked wrongly about colors and quantity. 
>>> I clicked the wrong colors and quantity. 
Unfortunately, It was my fault. 
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: It\'s my mistake. 
So I was not able to refund and change for free.
>>> CORRECT

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