How can you be a useful member of society?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s difficult right now. But when i go to the university, i will study hard in my major and get a job. So i can be a useful member of society.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Maybe for now you don\'t understand yet your role in society.
Take note of this, regardless of our age, we already have a role in society and one basic example is to take care of the environment. The way you throw your trash, and the way you take care of your surroundings, are simple ways for us to know that we can be useful in society even if we are young.
Great day ahead!
T. Aki~
It\'s difficult right now. But when i go to the university, i will study hard in my major and get a job. So i can be a useful member of society.
>>> It\'s difficult right now but when I go to the university, I will study hard in my major and get a job so I can be a useful member of society.
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