How can you become happy again when you are sad?
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Hello Christine!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I just cry loudly so that I can maximize my sadness.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> I just cry out loud so I can let out all of my sadness.
After I cry, it feels like I pour out all my emotions.
>> After crying, it feels like I poured out all my emotions.
So I become calm and relaxed.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> So I feel calm and relaxed.
Furthermore, I take a sleep so that I can refresh myself and relieve my stress.
>> Furthermore, I go to sleep so that I can refresh myself and relieve my stress.
Also I give a call to my mom and talk to her all about my sadness.
>> Also, I give my mom a call and talk about my sadness with her.
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