How can you convince someone to stop making a bad habit?

2025-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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If I want to change someone\'s bad habit, I would tell to them about baddest situations caused by bad habit. For example, If someone have a late habit, I will tell him or her. \"If you don\'t change your habit, you could be fired in a bad situation.

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Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I want to change someone\'s bad habit, I would tell to them about baddest situations caused by bad habit.
>> If I want to change someone\'s bad habit, I would tell them about the worst situations caused by that habit.

For example, If someone have a late habit, I will tell him or her.
>> For example, if someone has a habit of being late, I would say to them,

\"If you don\'t change your habit, you could be fired in a bad situation.
>> \'If you don\'t change your habit, you could be fired because of it.

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