How can you describe your family in your own words?

2021-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think my family is a teacher to each other. Because, my mom teach math, dad teach history, sister teach how to bake, and grand mother teach how to cook. Lastely, I teach foreign language.

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I think my family is a teacher to each other.

>> I think my family serves as a teacher to one another.

Because, my mom teach math, dad teach history, sister teach how to bake, and grand mother teach how to cook.

>> It\'s because my mom teacher Math, my dad teacher History, my sister teaches baking and my grandmas teaches cooking.

Lastely, I teach foreign language.

>> Lastly, I teach foreign languages.

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