How can you develop a good habit?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
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T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think that we can develop our good habit with doing something good often. Because we have bad habit from doing something wrong many times.
>> I think that we can develop a good habit by doing something good often because we have bad habits from doing something wrong a lot of times.
For example, if you want to have a habit that you wash your had often. Then you have to wash you hand often or you have to think about it every time.
>> For example, if you want to have a habit of washing your hands often, then you have to wash you hands often or you have to think about it every time.
Or you can memo things and you will notice that you have to wash your hand right now.
>> Another one is that can memo things and you it will remind you that you have to wash your hands right now.
I usually do the thing many times what I want to be get used to.
>> I usually do something that I want to get used to repetitively.
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