How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually get two days off a week. So one day I meet friends and go famous restaurant or cafe. I think I\'m extroverted so I love meet someone. But I have to recharge my energy , so the other day I take a rest alone. I spend my time cook myself, go cafe alone and read a book or watching netflix.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Hyebin. It sounds like you\'ve found a nice balance between socializing and alone time during your days off. It\'s important to have a mix of both to recharge and enjoy life. Keep it up!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
I usually get two days off a week.
>> Correct
So one day I meet friends and go famous restaurant or cafe.
>> So, one day, I meet friends and go to a famous restaurant or cafe.
>> OR: So one day I get together with some friends and we go to a well-known cafe or restaurant.
I think I\'m extroverted so I love meet someone.
>> I think I\'m extroverted, so I love meeting people.
But I have to recharge my energy , so the other day I take a rest alone.
>> But I have to recharge my energy, so on the other day, I take a rest alone.
I spend my time cook myself, go cafe alone and read a book or watching netflix.
~T. Jade^^
Homework: How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
I usually get two days off a week.
>> Correct
So one day I meet friends and go famous restaurant or cafe.
>> So, one day, I meet friends and go to a famous restaurant or cafe.
>> OR: So one day I get together with some friends and we go to a well-known cafe or restaurant.
I think I\'m extroverted so I love meet someone.
>> I think I\'m extroverted, so I love meeting people.
But I have to recharge my energy , so the other day I take a rest alone.
>> But I have to recharge my energy, so on the other day, I take a rest alone.
I spend my time cook myself, go cafe alone and read a book or watching netflix.
>> I spend my time cooking for myself, going to a cafe alone, and reading a book or watching Netflix.
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