How can you have a balanced life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I trying to a balanced life.
but not yet.
Sometimes I have no choice but to concentrate on making money.
Sometimes I spend more time raising children.
There will be know-how when you get older.
I think I can find the balance of life
강사 첨삭
Hello, Soolyn! It is not an easy role to be a mother, but I believe you can always be a great mother and an individual at the same time.
-Faith-
I trying to a balanced life.>> I try to have a balanced life.
but not yet.
>> However, I cannot do it yet.
Sometimes I have no choice but to concentrate on making money.
but not yet.
>> However, I cannot do it yet.
Sometimes I have no choice but to concentrate on making money.
>> Sometimes, I have no choice but to concentrate on making money.
Sometimes I spend more time raising children.
>> Sometimes, I spend more time raising my child.
There will be know-how when you get older.
Sometimes I spend more time raising children.
>> Sometimes, I spend more time raising my child.
There will be know-how when you get older.
>> CORRECT
I think I can find the balance of life
I think I can find the balance of life
>> Therefore, I know I can learn how to balance my life someday.
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