How can you help someone with depression?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. If depression is serious, seeking medical help is indeed necessary.
- T. Beth
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It`s better to listen to thier stories without disturbance instead of giving some advice.
>>> CORRECT.
Those who feel depressed are needed to express their circumstance to check them in depth.
>>> Those who feel depressed need to express their circumstances to check their situation in depth.
If i get a stress, It would help me to get rid of stress by telling all of to my friend.
>>> OR: If I am stressed, telling my friend all about it would help me get rid of the stress.
There is nothing else to do than to take a depression diagnose test in a facilities.
>>> There\'s nothing else to do but to take a depression diagnostic test in a facility.
Thesedays, It is common to visit there and lose others preconceptions.
>>> OR: These days, it is common to visit there and seek counseling.
At that time It is possible to exmaine their condition accurately.
>>> At that time, it is possible to exa[이름]e their condition accurately.
Accurate conditons and circumstance is needed to treat them.
>>> Knowing their accurate conditons and circumstance is needed to treat them.
I`m not expertise that field, Maybe the treatment and threat way will be differ from individual state.
>>> I\'m not an expert in that field, but maybe the treatment method will be different for each individual.
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