How can you help someone with depression?

2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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It`s better to listen to thier stories without disturbance instead of giving some advice. Those who feel depressed are needed to express their circumstance to check them in depth. If i get a stress, It would help me to get rid of stress by telling all of to my friend. There is nothing else to do than to take a depression diagnose test in a facilities. Thesedays, It is common to visit there and lose others preconceptions. At that time It is possible to exmaine their condition accurately. Accurate conditons and circumstance is needed to treat them. I`m not expertise that field, Maybe the treatment and threat way will be differ from individual state.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. If depression is serious, seeking medical help is indeed necessary.

- T. Beth

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It`s better to listen to thier stories without disturbance instead of giving some advice.

>>>  CORRECT. 
Those who feel depressed are needed to express their circumstance to check them in depth. 

>>> Those who feel depressed need to express their circumstances to check their situation in depth.  
If i get a stress, It would help me to get rid of stress by telling all of to my friend.

>>>  OR: If I am stressed, telling my friend all about it would help me get rid of the stress.
There is nothing else to do than to take a depression diagnose test in a facilities.

>>> There\'s nothing else to do but to take a depression diagnostic test in a facility.   

Thesedays, It is common to visit there and lose others preconceptions.

>>> OR: These days, it is common to visit there and seek counseling. 

At that time It is possible to exmaine their condition accurately.

>>> At that time, it is possible to exa[이름]e their condition accurately.  
Accurate conditons and circumstance is needed to treat them. 

>>> Knowing their accurate conditons and circumstance is needed to treat them.   

I`m not expertise that field, Maybe the treatment and threat way will be differ from individual state.

>>>  I\'m not an expert in that field, but maybe the treatment method will be different for each individual. 


 

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