How can you help to minimize any kind of pollution?
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I have a lot of experience that I lived alone without any accompanies far from my home.
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>>OR: I have a lot of experience living alone without any accompanies far from my home.
Especially It is a quite difficult how to get through the garbage and classify them on the designated day in Japan.
>>Especially it is quite difficult how to segregate of classify on designated place in Japan.
The rule is strictly applied to individual rooms in our building unlike our country and tenants should keep this rule to avoid some penalty.
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I’ve bought a lot of dedicated garbage bags like plastic, food waste, general waste and so on.
>>I bought a lot of designated garbage bags like for plastics, food waste, general waster and so on.
Although I spent my precious allowance to buy some garbage bags It made me to minimize environmental pollution through dividing into the same kind of wastes.
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Also, Japan’s electric charges is expensive much more than Korea.
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>>OR: Also, electric charges in Japan is more expensive than Korea.
I rarely had turned on the air-condition and heater during summer and winter so I could have saved electric power coincidentally.
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Some of the pollution around us can be reduced by these small things we can practice.
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