How can you help your community?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, help you resident, Second, mind the laws, Third, If you can help someone how need help, It's good to help
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! You did great here, but don\'t forget to use the correct punctuation marks in your sentences. Take care and see you! ~TEACHER ELISHA
First, help you resident, Second, mind the laws, Third, If you can help someone how need help, It\'s good to help
>> First, you could help your neighbor. Second, you should mind the laws. Third, you can help someone in need. It\'s good to help other people.
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