How can you improve your conversation skills? Explain.

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~~Teacher May~~

I believe thinking positive is the most important things to succeed in life.

>> I believe that thinking positively is the most important thing to succeed in life.

or >> I believe that being optimistic is the most important things to succeed in life.

How poor they are or how rich they are, the most important thing is a mind.

>> No matter what status they have in life, the most important thing is the mind.

I heard about the news that people who have lots of money often suicide.

>> I heard a news about people who have lots of money often commit suicide.

This news pointed that money doesn\'t the method to succeed.

>> It pointed out in this news that having money isn\'t the best method to succeed.

By the way, originally to succeeding in life is needed an intelligence and a practice.

>> Besides, the major things to consider to succeed in life are intelligence and practice.

The genius does not be a succeed person without practice when a person who practice in many time can be a succeed person.

>> A genius cannot be a successful person without a practice but when a person practices many times, her/she can be successful.

There is an adage saying in my country, \"Practice does not betray you,\"

>> CORRECT

I am always anxious about whether I can achieve my dream.

>> I am always anxious if I can achieve my dream.

Therefore I just practice all the time.

>> CORRECT