How can you make this world a better place?

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-Teacher Shelly-

All of the world very crowded that people have many cars.

>>> It is crowded and there are many cars around the world.

Now days each country have a environmental pollutions issues.

>>> Nowadays many countries have a pollution issue.

Again every year crime is increasing people live better life but we did not responsible our earth.

>>> Every year, crime increases, people live better, they are  not responsible in taking care of our environment.
 Here and there have many disasters,for example earthquake,flood, drought,tsunami,etc.

>>> There are many disasters, for example; earthquake, flood, drought, tsunami, and etc.
 We have to responsible our own place.

>>> We have to be responsible in our own place.

Last year I went to in Vietnam one of the tour place that was so many trashes.

>>> Last year I went to Vietnam, one place had to many trash.

I felt a so sad.

>>> Correct!
 By the way, if people got married do not divorced as much as they can.
>>> By the way, if people get married and don\'t get divorced, it may also reduce crime.

Most parents have to raise best job their own kid.

>>> Most parents have to raise their children by having the best job.