How can you overcome boredom?

2018-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher, Eunice. I so sorry for the loss you had today. I am praying for you during your time of loss. _____________________________________________________________________________ I would go smoking whenever I feel bored. This is really bad habit that I have to quit. I feel anxious, nervous and uneasy if I didn't smoke the time I have to do. I am no sure if you know about the smokers. Smokers have to smoke every hour or they have their own time for smoking. However, if I have to find another thing instead of smoking, I would read comic book with my smart phone. It is fun and we don't have to pay a lot of attention to do it. That is good way to overcome boredom.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for handing in your composition, Sir [이름]!

I like reading and correcting them. Keep them coming! I also appreciate your sympathy to our family. We are grateful for that. Have a smooth sailing Monday!

~Teacher Eunice


Teacher, Eunice.

>>> correct!
 I so sorry for the loss you had today.

>>> I\'m so sorry for the loss you had today.

I am praying for you during your time of loss.

>>> correct!

>>> OR: I pray for your loss.
 _____________________________________________________________________________
I would go smoking whenever I feel bored.

>>> correct!

This is really bad habit that I have to quit.

>>> This is a really bad habit that I have to quit.  

I feel anxious, nervous and uneasy if I didn\'t smoke the time I have to do.

>>> I feel anxious, nervous and uneasy if I wasn\'t able to smoke on my usual time.

I am no sure if you know about the smokers.

>>> I am not sure if you know something about smokers.  

Smokers have to smoke every hour or they have their own time for smoking. 

>>> correct!

>>> Smokers have routines for their habit.  

However, if I have to find another thing instead of smoking, I would read comic book with my smart phone.

>>> However, if I have to find another thing instead of smoking, I would rather read comic books on my smart phone.

It is fun and we don\'t have to pay a lot of attention to do it.

>>> correct!

>>> It\'s a great way to divert our attention from our vices.  

That is good way to overcome boredom.

>>> That is a good way to overcome boredom.  


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