How can you overcome boredom?
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Teacher, Eunice.
>>> correct!
I so sorry for the loss you had today.
>>> I\'m so sorry for the loss you had today.
I am praying for you during your time of loss.
>>> correct!
>>> OR: I pray for your loss.
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I would go smoking whenever I feel bored.
>>> correct!
This is really bad habit that I have to quit.
>>> This is a really bad habit that I have to quit.
I feel anxious, nervous and uneasy if I didn\'t smoke the time I have to do.
>>> I feel anxious, nervous and uneasy if I wasn\'t able to smoke on my usual time.
I am no sure if you know about the smokers.
>>> I am not sure if you know something about smokers.
Smokers have to smoke every hour or they have their own time for smoking.
>>> correct!
>>> Smokers have routines for their habit.
However, if I have to find another thing instead of smoking, I would read comic book with my smart phone.
>>> However, if I have to find another thing instead of smoking, I would rather read comic books on my smart phone.
It is fun and we don\'t have to pay a lot of attention to do it.
>>> correct!
>>> It\'s a great way to divert our attention from our vices.
That is good way to overcome boredom.
>>> That is a good way to overcome boredom.
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