How can you protect yourself from dangers abroad?
학생이 쓴 원문
From where I stand, I agree with that as we talked during the last class. I always carry out my belongings even I\'ve never experienced about the theft. And I heard it from a relative who went on a working holiday. He said that Unlike Korea, Australia doesn\'t have many CCTVs, so they can\'t find thieves. :)
강사 첨삭
You really need to be extra careful when you get there, [이름]. However, you deserve every wonderful experience you will gain there.-Faith-
From where I stand, I agree with that as we talked during the last class. >> CORRECT
I always carry out my belongings even I\'ve never experienced about the theft.
>> I always carry my belongings even if I\'ve never experienced theft.
And I heard it from a relative who went on a working holiday.
>> Also, I heard it from a relative who went on a working holiday.
He said that Unlike Korea, Australia doesn\'t have many CCTVs, so they can\'t find thieves. :)
>> He said that unlike Korea, Australia doesn\'t have many CCTVs, so they can\'t find thieves.
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