How can you rebuild a good relationship after an argument?
학생이 쓴 원문
How can you rebuild a good relationship after an argument?
If it is possible, I tend to avoid argument with someone.
I would like to say my opinion in empathetic way.
But many people doesn\'t think of me like this.
I try to speak softly but It is different from my thought.
End of my eyes are going up higher and voice gets sharly.
All motions become rough.
However, I continue it to understand why I get angry and upset.
And I try to wait for him to become calm down.
It takes very long time in the case of my husband.
We\'re on 4th day.
If I say somethin first him and then the period might get longer than now.
So, I\'m just waiting him ,doing myself work, hoping he\'ll cool off.
강사 첨삭
If it is possible, I tend to avoid argument with someone.
I would like to say my opinion in empathetic way.
But many people doesn\'t think of me like this.
I try to speak softly but It is different from my thought.
End of my eyes are going up higher and voice gets sharly.
All motions become rough.
However, I continue it to understand why I get angry and upset.
And I try to wait for him to become calm down.
It takes very long time in the case of my husband.
We\'re on 4th day.
If I say somethin first him and then the period might get longer than now.
So, I\'m just waiting him ,doing myself work, hoping he\'ll cool off.
>> CORRECT (but sounds unnatural)
OR >> If possible, I tend to avoid arguments with others.
I would like to say my opinion in empathetic way.
>>I would like to say my opinion in an empathetic way.
OR >> I would like to express my opinion in an empathetic way.
But many people doesn\'t think of me like this.
>> But many people don’t think of me like this.
OR >> But most people don’t see me this way
I try to speak softly but It is different from my thought.
>> I try to speak softly, but it comes out differently from what I think.
End of my eyes are going up higher and voice gets sharly.
>> The corners of my eyes go up, and my voice becomes sharp.
All motions become rough.
>> All movements become rough.
However, I continue it to understand why I get angry and upset.
>> However, I continue to do it to understand why I get angry and upset.
And I try to wait for him to become calm down.
>> And I try to wait for him to calm down.
It takes very long time in the case of my husband.
>> It takes a very long time in the case of my husband.
We\'re on 4th day.
>> We’re on the 4th day
If I say somethin first him and then the period might get longer than now.
>> If I say something to him first, the period might get longer than it is now.
So, I\'m just waiting him ,doing myself work, hoping he\'ll cool off.
>> So, I’m just waiting for him, doing my own work, and hoping he’ll cool off.
I hope by now you guys have already made up. Thank you for sharing, Stella.
- Teacher Elly~
I hope by now you guys have already made up. Thank you for sharing, Stella.
- Teacher Elly~
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