How can you succeed in something you\'re not excellent at?

2024-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

학생이 쓴 원문

It may be an obvious answer, but it basical and important answer. I think I need to keep practicing what I\'m not doing well and invest my time. People don\'t think they can do everything well from the beginning. That\'s why you need time to adapt to everything and you have to learn, understand, and practice through those times. I had experience, when I was in elementary school, I was not good at physical education. I should have jumped two-stage jump rope as a performance test, but I learned it step by step with the help of my parents and kept practicing until the performance test day. I couldn\'t even do one, but I kept practicing and got to do more than 10 on the performance test day. Also, you shouldn\'t keep thinking yourself that you\'re not good at it. If you keep thinking that you\'re not doing well, you\'ll be caught up in that thought and feel pressured before you even start.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
We must believe in our abilities to succeed in everything we undertake. Fear must not be allowed to rule our lives! 
In addition, your parents are really supportive as always <3
Chammy

It may be an obvious answer, but it basical and important answer.
>> It may be an obvious answer but a basic and important one.
I think I need to keep practicing what I\'m not doing well and invest my time.
People don\'t think they can do everything well from the beginning.
That\'s why you need time to adapt to everything and you have to learn, understand, and practice through those times.
>>Correct
I had experience, when I was in elementary school, I was not good at physical education.
>>I had an experience that I was not good at physical education when I was in elementary school.
I should have jumped two-stage jump rope as a performance test, but I learned it step by step with the help of my parents and kept practicing until the performance test day. 
>>I should have jumped the two-stage jump rope as a performance test, but I learned it step by step with the help of my parents and kept practicing until the performance test day.
OR
>> I should have jumped the two-stage jump rope as a performance test, but I mastered it gradually with the support of my parents and practiced until the morning of the exam.
I couldn\'t even do one, but I kept practicing and got to do more than 10 on the performance test day.
Also, you shouldn\'t keep thinking yourself that you\'re not good at it. 
>> Also, you shouldn\'t keep on thinking that you\'re not good at it.
If you keep thinking that you\'re not doing well, you\'ll be caught up in that thought and feel pressured before you even start.
>>Correct

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