How close are you to your extended family?
학생이 쓴 원문
After I got married I often met my low’s family.
We often talked on the phone.
It was a etiquette in my low’s family.
But It has been 28 years I got married and
I am getting older. So I don’t do that.
I would like to be free.
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After I got married I often met my low’s family.
>>After I got married I often met my in-laws.
We often talked on the phone.
>>Correct!
It was a etiquette in my low’s family.
>>In the family of my in-laws, it was common.
But It has been 28 years I got married an I am getting older. So I don’t do that.
>>But I\'ve been married for 28 years, and I\'m getting older. So I avoid doing that.
I would like to be free.
>>Correct!
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