How closely do you think good manners are related to income and social status?

2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think that good manners have a little things to do with people’s income or social status. Indeed, we’ve seen many cases that high profile or rich people behave badly. I have personally witnessed that people driving expensive luxury cars throw away cigarette butts out of the windows. Famous celebrities or politicians often appear on the news because of their bad manners like humiliating waitress at the restaurants. One of the sensational scandals that hit the nation last year was that the daughter of the chairman of the leading airline company in Korea yelled and forced flight attendants to kneel down for just serving Macadamia nuts without a plate. I believe that having good manners are all related to education from the beginning. We should be educated at the kinder garden or even earlier to treat others with respect. And home education is also important. Children will learn from their parents how to behave. The fundamental things is how we act to others properly.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]!

How are you today? Did you have a good day?
Thanks for your time and for sharing your thoughts with me.

I won\'t forget the one that the daughter of the chairman yelled and forced the flight attendants to kneel down for serving the Macadamia nuts without a plate.

I appreciate that you always make it to a point to elaborate your ideas in class.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


I think that good manners have a little things to do with people’s income or social status.

>> I think good manners have a little thing to do with people\'s income or social status.

Indeed, we’ve seen many cases that high profile or rich people behave badly.

>> correct

I have personally witnessed that people driving expensive luxury cars throw away cigarette butts out of the windows.

>> correct

Famous celebrities or politicians often appear on the news because of their bad manners like humiliating waitress at the restaurants.

>> correct

One of the sensational scandals that hit the nation last year was that the daughter of the chairman of the leading airline company in Korea yelled and forced flight attendants to kneel down for just serving Macadamia nuts without a plate.

>> correct

I believe that having good manners are all related to education from the beginning.

>> correct

We should be educated at the kinder garden or even earlier to treat others with respect.

>> correct

And home education is also important.

>> correct

Children will learn from their parents how to behave.

>> correct

The fundamental things is how we act to others properly.

>> correct

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