How competitive are you?

2015-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

When I self-access myself, there are some areas that I’m quite good at and also other skills and personalities that I need to improve.Overall, I can say that I can rank myself the top 20 out of 100 people.I am quite well organized and have analytical skills. As my desk is always maintained clean, I organize my thoughts. I gather information, sort it out, and prioritize tasks to resolve the problem. I know how to approach to tackle the issue. I’m willing to take a responsibility for what I do.Once I start something, I don’t give up until I complete it. I always maintain the high level of integrity. However, I am not excellent in speaking in front of people on the stage.I’m very sensitive and get emotional easily. When I take part in the heated debate, I often lose my temper. Experts say that we need to improve our weakness, but another theory is that we have to focus on our strengths. We have to continue enhancing our good skills because improving our weakness requires more efforts.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!!!!

Happy Friday!!!

Thanks for a good composition.

It is good to know our strengths and weaknesses.

In order for us to work on the things that we are not good at.

And improve more on our strengths. Have a good day and weekend.
We are not going to have our class tonight, I hope that you will have a great time with your family and friends.
See you on Monday.
Teacher Nina


When I self-access myself, there are some areas that I’m quite good at and also other skills and personalities that I need to improve.

>> correct

Overall, I can say that I can rank myself the top 20 out of 100 people.

>> correct

I am quite well organized and have analytical skills.

>> correct

As my desk is always maintained clean, I organize my thoughts.

>> correct

I gather information, sort it out, and prioritize tasks to resolve the problem.

>> correct

I know how to approach to tackle the issue.

>> correct

I’m willing to take a responsibility for what I do.

>> correct

Once I start something, I don’t give up until I complete it.

>> correct

I always maintain the high level of integrity.

>> correct

However, I am not excellent in speaking in front of people on the stage.

>> correct

I’m very sensitive and get emotional easily.

>> correct

When I take part in the heated debate, I often lose my temper.

>> correct

Experts say that we need to improve our weakness, but another theory is that we have to focus on our strengths.

>> correct

We have to continue enhancing our good skills because improving our weakness requires more efforts.

>> correct

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