How convenient is public transport in your city?
학생이 쓴 원문
My city has two modes of the public transport. one is the bus, the other is the light rail. The former is more convenient the latter. The section of the rail is very short. Above all it is located in far from the places of residences. But it is useful to go the airport.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]!
My city has two modes of the public transport.
>>> My city has two modes of public transport.
>>> OR: There are two modes of public transport in my city.
one is the bus, the other is the light rail.
>>>correct
The former is more convenient the latter.
>>> The former is more convenient than the latter.
The section of the rail is very short.
>>> correct
Above all it is located in far from the places of residences.
>>> Above all, it is located far from the places of residences.
But it is useful to go the airport.
>>> But it is useless if you want to go to the airport.
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